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Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

0 posted 2000-10-04 03:56 PM

He called her just the other day.
She told him she couldn't talk.
That speaking with him again,
could tear her heart apart.

He begged for her to listen,
he promised not to cry.
All he wanted was one chance,
to revive what they'd let die.

They sat there on the phone,
trying to stay calm.
These two; they attempted to right the wrongs,
they'd worked so hard to accomplish.

She sobbed a little, and then she spoke,
Saying this is just too hard to do.
She refused to listen to his pleading,
she knew it would do no more for them.

Then she told him good bye,
good luck in all he does...
"Maybe we'll meet again someday,
When it's a better time for us."

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-10-04 05:19 PM

This had my attention throughout the whole thing as I anticipated the result of the call. Great writing, I liked it.

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-04-2000).]

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

2 posted 2000-10-04 05:52 PM

Wow its like you were writting for me cuz the same thing happend to me like a week ago between me and my ex

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

3 posted 2000-10-04 05:53 PM

I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! it is so great!!! keep it up!!

~*Justine*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-10-04 08:13 PM

Hey this was really good. I was surprised because it applies to my life a lot. I liked it tons.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2000-10-05 10:26 AM

Awesome writing. you described the events really well. it just catches your attention like a really good movie. great job Jenn

Thanks for sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

TAP2
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 211
Morris, Il USA

6 posted 2000-10-05 10:30 AM

You're so talented! I love to read your work, it's like an ever-unfolding adventure.

Thomas

Let not a word go unspoken,
A thought go unheard,
Let not one heart be broken
Dream of a perfect world.

-Th.A.P.

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