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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
to death, you have committed a grat sin taken a great men, while sitting alone His wife out for a walk his family unaware A great man with a lumincent past the world mours his passing from Lisboa to Madrid Madrid to Havana Havana to Miami Miami to New York Dedicated to Manolo my great uncle 1917-2000 |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I'm sorry to hear about this. You've written a great poem though, wonderful writing! |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
thanx, I'm glad that you enjoyed. for a while I was kind of doubting that I should post this one (he died on labor day). but eventually I just decided to do it. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the poem was great. Keep it up jose!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
thanx dopey |
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