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Rainbow of Emotion |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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WHITE pure simple snowflakes innocence GREY foggy dismal smoke confusion GREEN living growing ivy strength YELLOW bright shining fire victory ORANGE golden warm sunset friendship RED true sensual blood passion PURPLE loyal steadfast velvet courage BLUE calm soothing tears sorrow BLACK dark smothered shadows death I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
wow! that was so cool. I really liked that!! Great job! Keep writing! Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey yeah I agree with sweetstuff that was really cool. I never thought of writing a poem like that. Expresses the "true colors" of life huh? LoL ok im a dork. but keep writing!! ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was very interesting due to its creativity factor. This was a great poem to read and a much appreciated post. Keep up the fine work!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. This is really very neat! It's creative, and unique. I liked the imagery it formed for me. Kudos! Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Hey Meredith, long time no see. This was great. I really liked the origionality on this play of colorful words. Good show! jason I'm not concieted...I'm convinced. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very creative, I like this a lot  Where did you get the idea for it? [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Love reading your stuff! Liked this a lot,I must say. Very pointed conveyance, and beautiful meshing of color with life...and death. Thomas Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This was so creative...I like it...I hope you post more...I havent seen you in awhile... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I really liked how you combined colors and emotions together. Very creative work! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey everyone, thanks for your comments! Strangely enough, I got the idea for this poem because I was looking at my many colorful bracelets instead of listening to my govt. teacher lecture to us. I think it's cute, not my typical style. Peace love and potato chips guys! *~Meredith~* I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
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