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Preach of the Corporate Mother
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Preach of the Corporate Mother |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
Look into my disintegrating eyes i am the hate that you hide stand above your grave in disgust this is who you ARE!!!!!!!!!!! rotten lives of greedy lust sick em sick em sick em sick em love me just one more time please disease me in my prime LOOK AT US NOW!!! LOOK AT US NOW!!! hide in the alleys, build up our bile this is our time, not our trial. living in vain, we are your GOD slaving away, taking your money.. the rich get richer, the poor get poorer Corporate ****!!! no we're the wives.. i could buy anything in the world.. i could buy the world.... crack open a smile on my face, i bought your children used em for money, taking your place.. say we have no souls?..we sold ourselves to get raped and payed.. thanking our husbands with the money they made corporate corporate corporate love look at how the others starve corporate corporate corporate love bring the rope you need to be hung this is our time, our bloody march sell yourself to save yourself god screams in dissonance ..to bad he's dead... our love is your virus, your hate is what drives us HUT TWO THREE FOUR! HUT TWO THREE FOUR! the clowns on parade the clowns mascerade rip off your face rip off your brain the clowns on parade -me |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
hmm...what can one say about this...It WAS an interesting read...very interesting...there were somethings behind it that...well...shocked me to say the least...yet they are all very true. I can't say that I didn't like it, yet there was something about it that made me look away in...in what? Distaste? No, not distate...guilt maybe...no not guilt...what then? I can't explain it very well as you can clearly see...but I did like it...very much. **life is like an ice cream...the trick is not to get brain freeze** **I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away** ~Robbie Williams~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
All have to agree with my (Stuningly) bueatiful companion on this (hehe). Like i said before, very disturbed...and very song worthy, do you compose? If not, you should really consider it...you'd make a much darker sound then Beck...Welll, good luck whatever you choose to do. Spreading insanity, one post at a time "Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Holy mother of God, this poem rocked to an extreme amount. This looked professional in my eyes. This was a billy corgan kind of writing against society and conformity. Billy corgan is my idol...lead singer of the smashing pumpkins. HOly crap this kicked so much booty........ SOOOOOOOOO MUCH. this was Godly hahahaha. I REALLY did like it. Im not going to say it was interesting with some sorta of "it had something about it....bla bla bla".....im gonna flat out tell you what i think about it: KICK ASS!!!!!!! plain and simple!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
WOW~* Well this was unique but it totally rocked. Loved your passion in this, keep up the great work! ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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