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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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Days, months, years, I've withstanded abuse. Too many times, I let my opinion lose. Every futile effort I've made to render silence leaves me further engulfed and enraged with feelings of violence. Leave me in my peace with security through the night. With every insulting line is another internal fight. Jeremy D. Halstead 6/25/00 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Once agian Jeremy, a wonderful peace of art. You have a great talent. This is exactly the way I feel. People then tell you you should open up, talk to them, but it is easier said than done. If you have been living your whole life this way, how can you change in just one day! Fantabulous poem! Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jeremy~ about the poem-Wonderful!! I'm sorry to hear this pain is eating at you away so much. What I don't understand is the full meaning behind it. If you're having problems with something I'd be glad to listen and help as much as I possibly can!!  Please e-mail me and let me know what's goin on. If ya want! Love Always~*~Jess~*~p.s~sorry that I haven't been in touch as much lately!!!  I've been at chris' house a lot helping him with everything going on. I still love ya, Chris just really needs me right now and I wouldn't give up the chance to do everything I possibly can for the world! You know how that is I'm sure! Love ya!~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great work as always you always seem to do something great and then come back with something even greater. love the piece keep them coming. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a great poem. I know what it's like to be tormented like this. As long as you keep your head up, they can never win. If you ever need to talk, feel free to e-mail me! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
there are some people that write poems just to write like i do...but then there are people who take problems in there lives and write about them like you...your poems are beautiful...i really give you props for this one... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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