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I Should Have Known
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I Should Have Known |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA 
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I should have known I should have known It wouldn't last It started too quick It ended too fast I didn't want to get involved But I couldn't tell you "no" I was afraid, But I wouldn't let it show Someone always gets hurt And I knew it would be me But I was blinded by love I couldn't really see I knew I should have ended it But I couldn't let you go You're the man I always dreamed of I needed you to know I wanted it to work And I really thought it would We made each other happy Like no others could But then something happened We slowly drifted apart We did some things That weren't very smart We told lies We hurt feelings We did some things That need some healing We weren't meant to be I saw it from the start I knew you would do it You broke my heart How could you do it? Can't you hear my cries? Can't you see these tears Streaming from my eyes? Nothing lasts forever this has been shown We weren't meant to be together I really should have known. ~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~ |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
wow im gonna be the first 2 reply to this poem its so lovely you express your feelings the best i have ever seen. "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
An excellant literarition of the confused feelings we all go through...............dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot Uh...bad milkshake... Spreading insanity, one post at a time "Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
really a very emotional piece. You have a really great way of expressing your feelings. I'm sorry for the loss. Keep writing and keep up the good work. Keep ya head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Sweetstuff~~~This is really good...You expressed what you are feeling so well...I wish I was able to do that...I mean I could but not as well as you did...I am not to much of a person that lets it all out...You know what I mean...Thanks for sharing this!!!< !signature--> It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 10-01-2000).] |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
hmmm...confused...angry...hurt...feelings that all of us know so well...difference is...you manage to express them in this wonderful poetry... Keep it up. **life is like an ice cream...the trick is not to get brain freeze** **I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away** ~Robbie Williams~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree with the others and to add too them, it flows wonderfully too. Great job writing this one  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem, i really liked the way it was written!!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Wow this was really great! and so true, I know how you feel! keep it up |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Nicely penned SweetStuff! You've expressed your feelings well in this, and the flow is excellent, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey! This was awesome. Sounds like something i would write Keep up the great work and I hope things work out for you because something good always comes of something bad. Keep that chin up and Keep smilin ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good job here. I think I've felt almost all of those things... If only we knew then what we know now... Huh?? Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
This is a purds poem! It's so be-u-teefull!I love your poems! now reply to mine!!!! Hey This is me and my work so I hpoe you like it??? |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
wow girl this poem ROCKS! it is so heartfelt... i have been where you are many times before and it BITES! keep writing!!! ~*Pixie*~ |
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