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Look into my eyes
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Look into my eyes |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I hold your hand and feel your pain, to her your love is just a game. She takes your heart and rips it in half, you cant go on like this, you just wont last. You think your not deservant of anyones love, take a look at me, what do you think im thinking of? I once heard that a girls life story is tolled by her eyes, do you believe that? Just try it, take a look inside. I love to be with you and cuddle throughout the night, we can act whatever way we please, it doesnt matter, everything feels right. We're best friends through good times and falls, you know i care for you but thats not just all. You tell me you love her day after day, she cant continue hurting you with her selfish ways. Your not good enough for anyone, no one wants you, is that what you think? I tell you how special you are, i tell you i care. I share with you my feelings, my hopes and my fears. But still you feel your alone in the world, all you have is me. You think no one cares for you, are you really that oblivious to open your eyes and see? I ask you again to look into my eyes, take a look inside and then you'll see, that someone loves you, that someone is me. |
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HerMelness Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37Bridgewater, NS, Canada |
Aww... an adorable poem, very sweet. That's just the kinda thing the guy would love to read.. *hint hint* =) Keep writing! -Wherever you go, go with all your heart.- |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I liked this one a lot!! Very sweet and shows you truly care. I think that you should give it to him, and tell him how you feel! Just my opinion though. Best of luck! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Awww this is so sweet...So did you give it to him???Well I hope you do cause this is just the sweetest poem...I really love the way that you ended it...Thanks for sharing!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
indeed this was very sweet...i liked this style you wrote in...good job HUT TWO THREE FOUR! HUT TWO THREE FOUR! the clowns on parade the clowns mascerade rip off your face rip off your brain the clowns on parade -me |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
That was a really sweet poem. He is lucky to have a chica like you waiting for him. But you need to let him know how much you care... you can't remain alone forever waitin' for him to wake up and see what's in front of him!! Good luck! Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thanks everyone! I think i might give it to him but of course im scared and his love for her is a great threat to me, i almost feel as though i dont have the right to tell him how i feel knowing how he feels about her, almost like i should know better or something. I'll let you all know if i do decide to give this to him =o) |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
I think KoRn said it best... "Look into my eyes, i am free, you're just a wanna-be!" I think your friend needs a heavy dose of reality (About 50mg). Yeah, and share it with him...lala... "...You can hit me again, if you like, throw your hate at me, with all your might, tell me i'm a pussy and your harder than me.,." KoRn, "Clown" Spreading insanity, one post at a time "Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven" |
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