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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-10-01 04:49 PM

My life has been taken from me,
My happiness & joy.
I feel i'm being thrown around,
As if i were a toy.

Im wasting away,
As though i did before.
I thought i got better,
I guess im not anymore.

I wish that people would disappear,
And leave me alone.
I want to throw out my beeper,
And unplug my phone.

I'm giving people help,
When i need it more.
I dont care for people's help,
I'd rather spend my life behind closed doors.

I dont want anyone to care for me,
I want them to go away.
I dont even want to go on,
To see another day.

One day i'll be gone,
And people will wonder why.
It'll be because they didnt think,
To see the hurt in my eyes

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-10-01 04:57 PM

Welcome to Passions!!!

I like this poem...I especailly like this part:

One day i'll be gone,
And people will wonder why.
It'll be because they didnt think,
To see the hurt in my eyes

I think that we all hurt people throughout our lives...But the thing is that we dont realize it...Thanks for sharing this with us though!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

2 posted 2000-10-01 05:03 PM

MY goodness, do I know what you are talking about!!! This is the exact way I am felling this very moment. I am in this deep depression that I can't seem to pull myself out of...And I just want to go away...Anyways, This was a wonderful post and I loved it!!!! I can't wait to see more!!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

p.s.

Welcome to Passions!!

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

3 posted 2000-10-01 05:25 PM

Hey there great poem i love it. You see keep writting on here and dont be affraid to post crap you dont know even know is good or not okay bye

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-10-01 05:36 PM

Welcome to Passions

I like this one, it was very expressive. I'd like to see more of your poems!

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

5 posted 2000-10-01 05:39 PM

Welcome to Passions. That was a great poem and know what you are feeling.. I feel the same a lot!!! Keep writing that was good!
Cutie

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

6 posted 2000-10-01 06:17 PM

yes Welcome to Passions!...well i really loved this...you wrote it beautifully...i look foward to future posts...

HUT TWO THREE FOUR!
HUT TWO THREE FOUR!
the clowns on parade
the clowns mascerade
rip off your face
rip off your brain
the clowns on parade
-me

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

7 posted 2000-10-01 07:26 PM

Welcome to passions! Let me be the first to...DOH...guess not...hehe

I often would rather suffer in darkness then open my eyes, after all, the light is so painful...but there no use stumbling in darkness when you could be so much happier, so step out side and open your eyes...

In-wishing-i-was-so-strange

Hehe

THERE IS NO SPOON

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

"Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven"

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2000-10-02 06:55 AM

Welcome to Passions xShUgArHiGhx!

We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us and please keep in mind that we are very supportive of each other. The pleasure you receive from reading comments on your work is the same pleasure others need by receiving your comments on theirs. This is a rule that all poets here follow. We invite you to join the family!

This was a wonderful first post. Sometimes we just need some time to ourselves, away from the noise of others to replenish the soul. A little quiet time does wonders to refresh me.

I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message)

Best wishes,
/Kit

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

9 posted 2000-10-02 07:24 AM

thats soo sad! I hope ou are feeling better soon, no one should have to feel that way. But it was a geat poem, Keep writing!

Luv, SweetStuff

~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

10 posted 2000-10-02 07:44 PM

Welcome to passions, i'd like to be the ummmmmmm 10th to say hi to you! HELLO! great poem, hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

11 posted 2000-10-03 01:50 PM

Hey! and i'll be the 11th to welcome you

WoW this was really cool. I've always thought that the way into anyone's heart is through their eyes. Our eyes show our every intention and emotion, hey theres an idea for a new poem

I feel your pain, keep that chin up and smile like you're about to conquer the world
~!*DQ*!~

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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