All im asking of you (Replys appreciated)

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Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

0 posted 2000-10-01 04:33 AM

I am reaching out my hand to you
And I pray that you will take it
I am giving you my heart
Baby, please don't you break it

Pull me into your arms
Hold me until the crying ends
Don't let go until the pain stops
Not until my heart fully mends

Love me like no other
Has ever loved me before
If you never lie to me
I'll be yours forever more

This is all im asking
I know it may be a lot
But I need you in my life
Because you are all I've got

~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

1 posted 2000-10-01 04:48 AM

hate to sound like everyone else but this was really sweet...and i really liked how the words flowed throughout the poem..great job

HUT TWO THREE FOUR!
HUT TWO THREE FOUR!
the clowns on parade
the clowns mascerade
rip off your face
rip off your brain
the clowns on parade
-me

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

2 posted 2000-10-01 11:59 AM

Extremely sweet....it's great that you have someone like that in your life. Well, the poem is great, keep it up, hasta luego
Bel

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-10-01 12:54 PM

I thought the poem was really sweet. keep it up!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-10-01 01:33 PM

I am reaching out my hand to you
And I pray that you will take it
I am giving you my heart
Baby, please don't you break it

Good choice of words!!!I like it...Having someone like this in your life is the best thing in the world...

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-10-01 01:34 PM

oops sorry i accidentally pressed the button twice...

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 10-01-2000).]

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2000-10-01 02:12 PM

I like this one a lot, great job writing it!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

7 posted 2000-10-01 02:18 PM

I loved it. Great job. Keep up the kickin' work.

~Carly

Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line.
I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine...

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

8 posted 2000-10-01 03:12 PM

Such redundane (in replies) but I too shall have to say this was soo sweet! I hope everything keeps going for you and I hope that your relationship is great! Best of luck to the two of you!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

9 posted 2000-10-01 03:57 PM

Thank you everyone who has replied to my poem! And dont worry, i dont mind all you guyz sayin its sweet. Infact, thats exactly what i want to hear! Thank you for makin me smile! it means a lot to me to know that my work touches someone else.

~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

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