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Look at my daddy
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Look at my daddy |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Ok guys i wrote this when i was goin to my room and i saw my dad watchin tv and he looked so innocent it was painful for me to watch. enjoy! I see my daddy sitting there Looking lonely as can be You should see the look on his face That only I can see He looks so sad and gloomy I mean why not? What is now cancer Was once a small knot I look at my daddy And try not to cry Please dear God Don't let my daddy die "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one made me feel sad for your dad. I hope he wins his fight with cancer. This is very well written! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
You dad will get through this girl...Just stay strong and believe that he can do it...And show him that you will be there for him...Try not to cry (even though I know that hard) it shows sign of weakness...I will keep him in my prayers...Keep up the good work!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Wow i know how u feel if you get a chance u might wanna read the poem entitled cancer i wrote that and it tells how my aunt is going thru cancer. do u have icq? i wouldnt mind talking to you "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
aw, so sad.... I hope everything will be better for your dad (and you!) anyway...great poem curlygurly (  hehe, LUVit!! )!!!!!luvz, VS All of my life Where have you been I wonder if I'll Ever see you again ~*~*~Lenny Kravitz-Again~*~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is soooooooooo damn sad. The poem was wonderful. The ryhme scheme was beautiful and everything was great. BUt it was sosososososososososososososososososo sad. But great job in writing it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey there girlie! What a wonderful poem! I really enjoyed, I'm so sorry that your dad has been diagnosed with such a horrible disease. Be strong, and do remember that it is ok to cry, but do not lose your strength within those tears. Best of luck my dear. Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I don't really know what to say...except this was a wonderful poem...Stay strong... ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
I lost my dad of colon cancer on December 23,1999. Need to chat email me at [email protected] or IM me at Champ00grl Peace out ~*~Fairy Princess~*~  http://netpoets.net/img/ic15.gif When YOU leave someone in love, friendship, death ect.. You leave footsteeps in their hearts |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Oh my gosh! This is so sad!  My grandfather died of cancer when I was 12. He had won the battle once but the cancer came back 5 years later and it had spread through all his organs. The pain of watching him slowly wither away in his hospital bed was excruciating and It is something that I will NEVER forget, no matter hoe much I try. I can relate to what you are feeling. Be strong. I'll be praying for you.Best wishes, Suga [This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 09-30-2000).] |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
*Dang* girl...this whole thing sucks so bad, it shouldn't have been Dad. Grrrr, but I guess that can't be changed so we'll just have to beat this crap. Hey, go hit the bleachers a couple times...just don't break your whole arm  . Great poem, keep it upHasta luego Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This is a really cute poem.. I loved it.. My dad died.. Not of cancer but still, it is soo sad.. Hope you and you father get better. Luv ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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