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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-29 04:41 PM

Screaming for the Abstracts:

Destroy fact and reason!
Down with concrete nouns!
Long live the abstract world,
Perspective, and opinions,
Fantasy, and wisdom!
It is thought that governs the universe,
And it is I who praises it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2000-09-29 05:09 PM

What can I say about this. This is one of the best I've ever read of yours. This one got me thinking hard. Reality is not easy i guess and it's not wrong to dream once in a while, but let's not live in it because it might actually cause more hurt than reality
keep it up. keep writing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-09-29 05:13 PM

I like this one, yo. And you can feel special that this is the first POEM I've replied to in like a month. (haven't dropped in here lately) Anyway, good job.

*~Meredith~*

I'll just keep on laughing,
Hiding the tears in my eyes...
*Oleander

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

3 posted 2000-09-29 07:54 PM

i think i should just start writing speachless on all of your poems dope..

I am buried up to my neck in
Contradictionary flies
I take pride as the kind of illiterature
I'm very ape and very nice
-Kurt Cobain

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

4 posted 2000-09-29 11:47 PM

An absolute wonder! You are truly talented and I can't wait to see your most recent pieces...Keep 'em coming
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-09-30 01:47 PM

Another great one, you have great thoughts going through that head of yours

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

6 posted 2000-09-30 02:04 PM

um..........i dont get this one all that much the words are just to big for me well n e ways im sure it makes a lot of sense keep writting (try 2 use smaller words sometimes for ppl like me) j/k ha ha gret job

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

7 posted 2000-10-01 11:55 AM

This is really good Dopey

...I can't really think of much else to say...but...oh yeah, a question. Do you ever write anything in Spanish? Alright well keep it up, hasta luego
Bel

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2000-10-01 01:07 PM

no i never write in spanish, unless it has to do with the spanish class.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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