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This is a love poem to King Arthur from his Queen Gwenhyfar
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This is a love poem to King Arthur from his Queen Gwenhyfar |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Arthur, you are the king of my nights The barer of my soul Without you in my life I would just crumble and fall But God has truly blessed me For I find great strength and courage as your wife And thankful that you allow me to stand tall by your side No other could possibly take your place And no other could haunt the chambers of my heart with such a boyish face And I doubt no other could ever love me with such grace M'lord I also need to add You are the sweetest and greatest of all this land And I shall never leave your side So just as long as you continue to find that strength you need so much as you hold my hand.. < !signature--> "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow this was really cool. Keep it up. ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This was good!!!I wasnt a big fan of King Arthur when we read it...But I did like the movie!!!LOL Now you got me thinking where that book of mine is...Thanks for sharing this with us!!! It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful writing Ceinwyn! I particularly loved this line: "And no other could haunt the chambers of my heart with such a boyish face" This was a beautifully crafted piece, nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is cool, great job on it |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It seems that you are obsessed with medievil times. The poem was great.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
There is nothing wrong with being amused by medevil times! I personally never really payed attention to all that, but you write it well. I never read King Arthur...so I can't say much, but you intrigued me much. Keep it up Kristen! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey well i really liked the theme of this poem...king arthur and the queen...and it was written very well I am buried up to my neck in Contradictionary flies I take pride as the kind of illiterature I'm very ape and very nice -Kurt Cobain |
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