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The Tears |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
-The Tears- "Shut all guys out," I said "Its easier this way" "If you let them in," I said "Dearly you will pay" Love is not worth the hurt emotions can be ignored. Take your heart and hide it, lock it away and keep it secured. Once again, I did not listen. Nope, not today! Now I am paying dearly, and the tears, they flow away. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
i really liked this poem. you sure can write girl! i guess if you have something to write about it flows easy. keep up the good writin! Curlz "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I love the way you started this one...It was good!!!Keep up the good work!!!I enjoyed reading this one... It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, relationships can hurt so much, can't they? Good job expressing your emotions here!  *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey! This was great, it flowed lovely..just like your tears  Keep up the great work and stay strong~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, this is great! I sensed an attitude behind this one, I liked it Great job. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot Pixie. good job  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
this should teach a lesson to others who don't listen...loved the poem Pix.. I am buried up to my neck in Contradictionary flies I take pride as the kind of illiterature I'm very ape and very nice -Kurt Cobain |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
what am I to tell you? I know you've heard the 'ole it gets better with time, and I do believe that the pain subsides with time...but what are you to do unitl then?? My advice to you: Pick your heart up ff the floor and be kind to yourself and your emotions. Keep your head up girl! Best of luck! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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