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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
heres i sweet one from an evil man well teen. Beauty that is true can not be seen Through anyone's eye's you must relie On sheight of mind to show the true Beauty that grows inside a person Over a lifetime. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beauty is something found in the heart and soul.....much inner ugliness can be disguised in a pretty package. btw...like this one! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Beauty does grow and build up during the lifetime. However, too does inner hate and pain. True beauty is hard to find...even in the nicest people. Well thats what I have found..... ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
I agree with AF...nice poem, full of insight. "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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~Night_Mist~ Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 31Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey Jeremiah: Thanks for writing. I would love to be your friend and join the "lost souls". Isn't that all that we are? (Most of us!) Anyways, my e-mail is Annie890@hotmail.com and I'd love to hear from you. I love your poem. I totally agree with you. Keep writing... Luv, ~Night_Mist~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
these days beauty is considered by what you look like and what kind of body you have...i mean people dont care about your inner beauty and thats what counts...its like are some people just plain stupid that they would actually plan on spending there lives with someone over what they look like??? i dont know how someone can do that...anyways back on to the subject of your poem JEREMIAH it is beautiful...i always enjoy reading your work!!! ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Comfrey83 Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36Winchester, Mass USA |
i dunno, sure thats this totally great belief but pictures are beautiful for looks. they are empty, same as people but beauty comes in many forms anybody who doesnt care at all about makeup, clothes, cars, crap like that can tell me to can it. i see beauty everyday with my eyes maybe ugly people say stuff like that to make em feel better (im just joking around dont hate me for joking in this place that can be as solemn as the catacombs under rome) |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
This poem was really great. I think you really told us that there is beauty in everyone. You're poetry is getting to me...you put it in short terms, but it means so much. Love Nicole |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
inner beauty is truly the best...love your poem!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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