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My wants |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I want you in my arms, You can rest here away from harm, I want my lips on your thighs, My face locked in your eyes, I want to hear you sing, You don’t know what joy you bring, I want to see you smile, Share this with me a while, Let me sense those lips, I hope you are playing for keeps, Let me hide in your hair, Take me in your care, My soul is were you settle, You needn’t to fight anymore battles, Peace and security I will provide, If no secrets from me you’ll hide, Love and happiness I shall gladly give, In turn I request you not leave. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey Xeonox..this was a beautiful poem...a lot of emotion i sensed was in it...i think everyone wants what you describe in your poem..unless you're a anti-social nihilistic atheist like me!!lol jk..or maybe not I am buried up to my neck in Contradictionary flies I take pride as the kind of illiterature I'm very ape and very nice -Kurt Cobain |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
great poem and....hey aren't we all anti-social nihilistic atheists anyway?.....uh.....or not.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this one, great job on it  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I think that we all want stuff like this...Good way to tell us what it is you want...Good poem too!!!  It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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