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~*Meghan*~ Junior Member
since 2000-05-22
Posts 17 |
One night I dreamt of a friend that was an angel. The more I saw this image the more I believed in it. And then one day, this Angel appeared. "Did you know that I've been watching over you? And everytime you cried I lifeted your heart to mine. Did you know that in your hardest moments of life I was there by your side. I know you couldn't see me but I was there and I always cared." I was amazed. Never in my life had I heard words such as these spoken by an angel. An angel I call my friend. Further unto my life I realized that I've been touched by many angels. And unto your amazment you have too. And thorughout your life even when it may seem that noone is there to lean on take a look outside your window and ask God to send down an angel. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
great message on this on meghan. We need somthing possitive like this one in passions once in a while. keep writing  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
How touching!! I loved it. Keep t up. ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Meghan~~~This was beautiful...I really enjoyed reading this...Such beautiful thoughts!!!  It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
it was a sweet a n d beautiful p o e m  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very sweet and lovely words here! Well done! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
very nice sentiments. it's a nice thought to think we've got a helping hand when we need one. That's the sound of a bottle when it's hollow;when you swallow it all wallow and drown in your sorrow and tomorrow you're probably gonna do it again |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wonderfully put Meghan [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 09-30-2000).] |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
wow that was awesome! I liked it alot! Keep writing! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~ |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Hmmm, it is nice to think that there are Angels out there for all of us, and I hope that it is true. I loved the poem it was so sweet. Shell. **I didn't loose my mind it was mine to give away** ~Robbie Williams~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
So I could say you were "touched by an angel?" hehe anyways, I think of my friends when I read this, a beautiful write!! I was very impressed, you know what... it also reminded me of that story "footprints in the sand" ok enough babbling. Thanks for sharing it!! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
This is great, it's nice to read an postive kind of poem. Keep it upBel |
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