Teen Poetry #3 |
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CJM New Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 7 |
Yeah, I'm not sure why I wrote this, but I did. Anyone with title suggestions would be greatly appreciated, thanx ![]() |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey there this poem is short and sweet and its not always easy to pick a title but i think in this case a good one would be "cleary alone" i took it from e verses in this poem and if u put it together with the poem it sounds great good first post "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well, I like this a lot. For a title, how about "Confused" (The first letter of each line)? ANyway, great poem, you should post more! ![]() |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
I agree with branden, cleary alone would work well as a title for this poem. I think this poem is great, you shouldn't always have a reason to write poetry, sometimes it can just come to you in the middle of the night. But I find writing is a way of dealing with my problems, but thats just me. Keep up the good up, it was great!!! smiles ![]() ![]() |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
The only poem i ever wrote that refleceted in my life is called That night all the rest are just my views on how other ppl live life dont always write about feelings it will could possibly kill you writting its not always good to write about life "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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