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3rd Hell Attachment (5th Cycle)
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Yes, you read right! This is the first of the 5th Cycle poems. You should realize a drastic change in styles and aswell I concintrate more on NAMING my poems. For me, titles are EXTREMELY important. Sometimes one worded titles just won't cut it. 3rd Hell Attachment: It's all gone, this ping pong life. Faded friends of mystery. Lasting love never to be. Enchanted sea, fickle me. I lost my marbles years ago. Burning brush to hold so dear. Shadow dreams filled with fear. Golden lyre, poor and mere. Tear me apart from chastity. Rusted locket of yesterday. Hating way, there I sway. I'll come again another day.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
finally the 5th cycle!!!....what an introduction to it!!..this was so great and i see the style has changed...these are such great images man...damn "'I am the the lizard king I can do anything I can make the earth stop in its tracks I made the blue cars go away |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Rusted locket of yesterday." Excellent style and rhyme scheme Javier ... love the descriptiveness!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Dopey: the long awaited moment is finally here!!! anyways, I love this. You never answered my questions.  well, bye bye. Love ya, AllysaDon't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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