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Crazy II (New version of an old poem) |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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I admire every little thing about you From your smile to the sparkle in your eyes I'm not sure what to think or what to pursue You’ll always remind me of summer skies I cant wait anymore, until I see your face And experience the way you make me feel But until then its all in slow pace Because my breath is what you steal When I watch stars I often see Your name spelled out in the sky But I know there’s no way it can be So I go to sleep with you in my eye The ocean depth isn’t as deep as I feel for you And I cant get your voice out of my mind With all these feelings, I hope you knew That my heart is only one of a kind I wrote this in a note to my crush tonight. I signed it secret admirer, If she likes it and takes it the right way Ill tell her it was from me. Feedback is very welcome. Love, Jeremy R. "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
beautifully written jeremy...i'm sure your crush will melt after reading this...< !signature--> "'I am the the lizard king I can do anything I can make the earth stop in its tracks I made the blue cars go away [This message has been edited by anomaly187 (edited 09-25-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jeremy~~~This was so sweet!!!I hope she loves it!!!  It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
it was sooooo cute!!!! I would definitely fall for a guy if he wrote something like this for me!!! good luck with the girl!! luvz, VS Experience of survival is the key To the Gravity of Love ~*~Enigma~*~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
thanks, ill hit ya back when something happens. love, Jeremy R. "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! so sweet!! ~*Pixie*~ |
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Carly Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 17Michigan, USA |
*sigh* so sweet. she'll love it. |
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