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Teen Poetry #3

Dreaming Of You

~*Meghan*~
Junior Member

since 2000-05-22

Posts 17

0 posted 2000-09-25 10:21 PM

I wrote your name upon the sands
hoping you would appear
I looked across the seas
as if to see you there
I wished upon a star that night
that you would always be near
And I fell asleep that night
dreamig of you
~ * ~
I prayed to God that night
that you were always safe
I prayed to God that night
that no one would ever hurt you
I wished upon a star that night
that you and I would meet
And I fell asleep that night
Dreaming of you

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2000-09-25 10:24 PM

simple and sweet. You should give the person this poem. I'm just starting to read your work, and i'm pretty impressed. keep writing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-09-26 03:51 PM

This is great, I like it

I like the ending a lot:

And I fell asleep that night
Dreaming of you

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

3 posted 2000-09-26 05:14 PM

very cute poem

i think that you shouldn't just wish for the person you like to just suddenly appear and wanna go out with you, you should make the first move. bring him to you!
Curlz

"I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky"
Enrique Iglesias

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