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Why Do You Ask(for lack of better things to name it) |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Alirght everyone, I wrote this when I was bored today and had nothing better to do. I wrote it with a tone of sarcasm and humor, so please try to read it that way. As always, I appreciate all replies...gracias, hasta luego Bel Why do you ask? No breakfast No lunch You make a big deal Thanks a bunch Save a few calories Here and there I'd burn them off But I'm too dizzy to go anywhere Loose a few pounds this month A few the next Burr it's cold in here Gotta read the fine text Getting kind of pale You say I look like a ghost In my black shirt My skin's whitest-yellow at most Want to sleep in the morning Can't sleep at night No dreams only nightmares Nightmare world filled with fright See a few bones Somewhat visible through the skin I'm a mess Do I still get a 10? Grades, papers, people Ugh can't handle all the stress Got better things to worry about Than if they like the way I dress A funny little flutter Somewhere near my heart Hmmm I wonder When did that start I'm not hungry So don't make me eat Are you crazy How do you feel so much heat I'll just sit here and watch you What a lovely task No of course I'm not sick Why do you ask? Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I didnt read it with to much humor...Because I didnt know what parts would be spoken sarcasticly...You know what I mean???But this was really good...I did like it!!!  It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
WOW! I have a friend like that and she's goin through the same thing you are! lol hang in there and u'll be fine! see ya! Curlz "I've kissed the moon a million times, danced with angels in the sky" Enrique Iglesias |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
hey...wow its good to be back...anyway although i cant relate to the poem very well, and i can give any witty words of advice or anything, i dont know much about hte subject, just remeber, that your friends love you (least they should or they wouldnt be friends wounld they), andhang in there, youll be fine, pretty well written, like the small verses, i might have to try that if i ever get time...hehe all in all a good poem, sounds like you really meant what you wrote CLB always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :) |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Thanks everyone for posting: Erin- Yeah, I understand, I know what you mean. Thanks!! Curly- Thanks "lama momma," lol...... CLB- Yes, I really meant what I wrote...and thanks. You should post more often!! We haven't seen you in months(hint hint hint!!) Thanks again! Hasta luego Bel Beautiful is empty Beautiful is free Beautiful loves no one Beautiful stripped me -"Beautiful" CREED |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is something I can connect with *so* well. What is it with force feeding and people attempting to burst our little bubble of happiness we've created in a world of weight? I always did like your writing, Bel. There is a distinct sense of sincerity in everything that you write. Thanks for posting this. I'm glad I found it. ~AF~ "No wonder I do not make people comfortable. I am a mirror. I have far too many things to say." - Mouthing the Words |
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