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Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 2000-09-24 08:40 PM

We are the ones who live under the glowing stars.
To see the stars we have to be at peace.
Free the soul,
Free the mind,
Thats all you have to do.
When the stars come to life,
And the night remains still,
You can hear the thoughts from watchers like you.
Deep inside the heart of us,
You can feel the energy flow through everyone.
At this time everyone is nothing,
But nothing is everything.
For when energy like this is so great,
Not even the stars can compare with it.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2000-09-25 03:38 PM

WOW!!! this is a very, very, very good poem. Awesome write Wet -- whatever that means

seriously, this is the type of poem that gets published. BRAVO...You deserve a standing ovation

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

2 posted 2000-09-25 05:38 PM

This was very well worded! I enjoyed it much! I agree with Acire, you did well and this is the type of work that deserves publishing! Keep it up!
Always ~*~Star~*~

p.s. I'm also curious...what significance does your name have?

~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

3 posted 2000-09-25 09:58 PM

Thanks for the compliments. I really appreciate the replies. And my name stands for anything you want it to be.

[This message has been edited by Wet (edited 09-25-2000).]

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

4 posted 2000-09-25 10:26 PM

A standing ovationg is well deserved, and i think you have. great job and keep up the great work

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-09-26 05:52 AM

Excellent writing Wet! An enchanting read ... your imagery placed me right there in the silence of the mystical night. Beautiful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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