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Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

0 posted 2000-09-24 06:02 PM

I hope you like this one, it's for a friend that's going through a bad time, so I wanted her to feel better.

At your side

I wish I could love you,
I wish you were here,
Now that I’ve found you,
This can’t be real.

You are my heaven,
You are my dream,
You are the person,
With who I want to be.

If I had to go to hell,
To make you feel well,
I would stay there,
To relieve your despair.

My love is real,
My life is yours,
Just to heal,
The harm he’s done.

Anytime you need,
Anytime you faint,
I’ll be at your side,
To take all your pain.

It's been raining since you left me.

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2000-09-24 06:16 PM

great read. all about willingness to be the pin cushion. very sacrificial. very brave. keep up the good work.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2000-09-24 07:21 PM

Good work...now THAT'S a good friend. We all need a lesson from you.
Loved it!- Jenn

"He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright

Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

3 posted 2000-09-24 10:06 PM

Thanks, it's great that you liked the poem. Well, I wrote it with my hearth, and this girl really means that to me, so I hope she likes it too, but I just needed your approval. Well, thanks again, bye, and wish me luck, lol.

It's been raining since you left me.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-09-25 01:38 PM

This was really sweet...Such a good friend you are...But can I ask you something???Do you like this girl more then a friend???It sure seems like it...Well keep us posted on what happens when you give it to her...

p.s.~~~I think she will like it!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

5 posted 2000-09-25 04:04 PM

aaw Caz, this was SO good, and so terribly sweet !!!! keep on going this way!!!

luvz always, VS!!

Experience of survival is the key

To the Gravity of Love
~*~Enigma~*~

Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

6 posted 2000-09-25 06:49 PM

Hey, thanks ERIN and VS, you are very sweet, well I gave her the poem today. I think she liked it, at least I hope so.
Well, ERIN, I'm so in love with this girl, but I can't say that to her, she's going through a bad time now, and I don't want to be another problem for her, I love her too much to make her life harder.
Thanks again, bye.

It's been raining since you left me.

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