Teen Poetry #3 |
All Good Things Must Come To An End |
~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
I know I said forever But forever is not what it seems, This wasn't' exactly working out And some time is what it needs. I know you are probably mad at me And I can't see why you would be, Because it takes two to make a relationship And two to break it you see? So now that we are separated And we can still be good friends, Maybe soon you will realize All good things must come to an end. ~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~ |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
hey sis! keep posting them! now WHO has the TALENT??? ~*Justine*~ |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Val this is so adorable!! I love it! It's great! And so true... the friends part, however, well.... little shaky *L* for ME anyways. And sometimes once a "good thing" is over we realize it wasn't so "GOOD" after all! Keep up the good work hun! |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
I agree, it seems that all good things MUST come to an end whether we want them to or not. Just another one of the bad things that life is going to throw at us no matter how much we fight it. Great poem, keep up the good writing. Luv Always. Shell!! **Life's too short to drink bad Wine** |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Yes, sometimes good things must end, and it hurts to realize that... But something better always comes along, eventually. This was a good piece. Keep up the good work! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the diffrence. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Hey everyone thanks for replying, i think we can all agree that all good things must come to an end and that is why i wrote this because, believe it or not, there are some people out there who do not believe it. stupids. lol Catch ya'll on the flip side Later Days, Valerie ~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
When good things come to an end I think that it means something better is gonna come along...But oh well thats just my opinion...Thanks for sharing this!!! *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I disagree with "all good things must come to an end". Well, we can use an example of what erin said: She said that maybe the reason why something good ends is due to the fact that something BETTER is coming along. Now, if we take that into consideration, that "BETTER" is obviously a large degree of "GOOD". Who says it ever has to end? Obviously, with death, things come to an end, but who's to say that death is an end in itself? It may be only the beginning. Thus, not all good things MUST come to an end. Some keep on going and going for all of eternity. It's just a matter of believe, hard work, and an open mind. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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