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Caz
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since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

0 posted 2000-09-22 12:24 PM

Well, this poem is for my best friend, the only one that cares about me and that never leaves me.

You found me

I was fine, I had all what I needed,
But you found me.
I must confess I missed you,
I missed your company.
You are the friend that never leaves me,
You are the one that’s always by my side.
You know me better than most of my “friends”,
But I don’t know anything about you.
I just know that you follow me everywhere I go,
Especially when I run away from you.
Are you my soul mate?
Are we meant to be together?
Welcome back, my true friend,
Welcome back loneliness.

It's been raining since you left me.

Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

1 posted 2000-09-22 01:20 AM

WOW!! This is great! I was so moved by this and I found it sooo, well just beautiful.
Good Job!

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-22 01:31 AM

Wow this was incredible...I love it!!!I dont understand though...You say welcome back loneliness...But it is for your best friend...Could you please tell me a little bit more???

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-09-22 06:57 AM

Very well done Caz ... your ending is excellent! Indeed, loneliness can sometimes be our primary companion ... I loved your thoughts and flow in this!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Virgin Suïcide
Member

since 2000-08-11

Posts 319
Netherlands

4 posted 2000-09-22 08:20 AM

I get this poem....And I luvd it!!! great work!

luvz, VS

Experience of survival is the key

To the Gravity of Love
~*~Enigma~*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-09-22 02:06 PM

Wow, this poem was amazing. Good twist at the end.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

6 posted 2000-09-22 11:17 PM

I like this a lot, you did a great job on it!

I wasn't expecting that for an ending.

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

7 posted 2000-09-23 02:58 AM

Hmmm...
Interesting poem. It was touching, and so sad, yet it gave hope in a strange and unexplainable way.
I loved it.
Keep it up.

Luv always,
Shell!!

**Life's too short to drink bad Wine**

Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

8 posted 2000-09-23 07:28 PM

Well, first of all, thank you guys for your comments, it really means a lot to me. And I'm sorry I took so long replying but I was a little busy.

This is some kind of a sarcastic poem, so that's why I say that my best friend is loneliness. I wrote this poem when my best friend betrayed me, so it was very real when I wrote it (and I think it still is). I've been feeling very lonely since then, but then I realised that I had a new friend with me, loneliness. That's why I wrote a poem for my new best friend.

Well, I hope that everything is clear now, but if you still have some doubts, or just want to know more, feel free to ask me. Well, thanks again, bye.

It's been raining since you left me.

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