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My Liege, My Queen? (prt. 2 of My Hidden Soul)
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My Liege, My Queen? (prt. 2 of My Hidden Soul) |
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Falmeblade New Member
since 2000-04-03
Posts 7Boise, ID |
My Liege, My Queen? What or whom is this I see? Is it the one I search for, is it really thee? Pray, I hope it be true, I am coming to you I approach thee now, so mysterious to me, may you give me a clue? I wish to know more of thee, is it true, are you liege that I searched for? My Queen! Have I found thee at last?! For you I will not be a bore I will entertain thee and protect thee even though we are kept apart I see you briefly, and talk to you long, but I mean to ask, wherefore art?! I smile now affectionate to see your soft face, I’m lost in the kingdom My eyes search frantic, stop and ask, which way to the Palace, time is passing bloody pendulums! I find a courier, make him flee, with a message to reply to my queen with speed We shall meet away from formality amongst friends and neighbors with great stead For hours we shall talk on forever, perhaps even dance a few ways or play! We shall finally be together, the queen and her champion, and let the night fly away… tsorovan shan misain ye!!!!!! I am the lord of storms!!! Dovie'andi se tovya sagain It's time to roll the dice |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful Shakespearean feel to this story Falmeblade ... very nicely worded, well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem. I thought it was great. Good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Excellent follow up to the last peice FalmeBlade...and interesting language..I really enjoyed it...  "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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