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Teen Poetry #3

A Dark World

JandR4Eva
New Member

since 2000-09-20

Posts 9
Jacksonville, FL

0 posted 2000-09-20 06:31 PM

What a sad sad world,
So dark and cruel,
A world filled with hate & death,
When will we all finally wake up from this terrible dream that we all have,
And live our lives in the heavens of the real world.

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

1 posted 2000-09-20 06:33 PM

good poem, very deep. keep up the good work!

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-21 12:29 PM

Wonderful job!!!You expressed alot of truth...I like it!!!

*Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit*

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