Teen Poetry #3 |
What You Are to me |
MysticalAngel Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 23 |
You are a dream Come true to me A gift picked by God Out of a great big sea You are the light Sent to brighten my day To make my life better In every single way You are the moon Put to hang about the stars To light my path If I wonder too far You are my angel My heaven sent gift Here to watch over me As the years passed You are my life My world, my soul Without you my love My life would be cold You are what makes me happy When my days are sad and blue You brighten up every second That I spend each day with you Without you my world would crumble Pointless, my life would be Saddness would fill my days Because you were no longer here with me But our love grows stronger Each and every day And I know we love each other In each and every way Another poem about Andrew... Tell me what you think! Thanks |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
ok ok i just got done reading to other one and i see you really care for him but doe's he know? if not i think you should show him these. best of luck and hope to you. great poem if i might add i voted. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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MysticalAngel Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 23 |
Thank you very much! He does know how much I love him and until I am 18.. only a year.. we can't be together. My parents don't like him and plus he lives about 5 hours from me. And one other thing stopping us... he's in jail. I don't know for how long. I only hear things from his family. But hopefully things work out the way I want! Thank you Jeremiah! Your opinions mean alot to me! Your a sweety! MysticalAngel ** If something is too good to be true... 9 times out of 10 it is ** |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow, you're really good at expressing your feelings for him. That poem was really good. keep it up, and good luck to you both Bel |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Ahhhh!This is so sweet and full of feeling. Show it to him (if you haven't already). I love the imagery...keep it up!! "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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