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Pieces of a Broken Heart
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Pieces of a Broken Heart |
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JandR4Eva New Member
since 2000-09-20
Posts 9Jacksonville, FL |
Love, what is it all about? You care so much for someone and yet they break your heart. You try to give that one person the world and they take advantage of it. How can one love when they love another at the same time? They must then chose who they'll be with, waiting & hoping for that someone to pick you. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Well said! This is really good, I like how you said so little but made it mean so much ...keep up the great work!! ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Well ususally I say that being completely understood is one of the worst things, but I totally know where you are coming from! Just remember to keep your head and and I promise one day you will find the right one. One thing I learned: Patience is a virtue! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. This might help too~*~Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds, including the heart. Soon enough, the pain will subside and the ache, just a distant memory. A scar shall remain this is true, but that too, with time shall fade...~*~< !signature--> ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-20-2000).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. I, myself, have never experienced true-love. But the times when I've come closest, I become scared and run away. I think the day I find it, if I lose it, I'll cry a river. I like this, it was short, but impressionable. Good work. Jenn "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Love is a learning experience...When you fall in love or "puppy" love its just a practice...To make sure your heart can take it when you find the right person for you...At least thats what I think...But anyways you have expressed what is on your mind in a good way...It was short, and straight to the point...I enjoyed it... Read my quote I think you may like it...Well not like it but find that it might have something to do with what you are going through...< !signature--> *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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