Teen Poetry #3 |
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True friend |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Carla I was seeking, in the sea of loneliness, for a friend to light my way, and I found you. At the beginning, my eyes couldn’t see deeper, than my own reflection in the water. But suddenly, a blinding light emerged, from the turbulent waters, allowing me to see for the first time. I wish I could love you, but we are just another shadow, in the sea of darkness. I’m happy now, I can share my feelings, with a true friend. Well, this is my second poem, I wrote it to a friend that I met on the internet a few days ago. She is very nice with me, and she's so sweet, so I tried to write something about her, well, and fo her. I hope you like it, but every poem I have read here are so good. All of you guys are very good poets. I will try to work harder to post better poems. Thanks. Ohhh, if you want to see a really good poem, you have to see Allysa's poem "The End Of Roses", it's very good. Bye It's been raining since you left me. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a good poem. And yea you don't have to try and post "better" poems. No need buddy, i mean.....i don't come on here to read crappy or good poetry, i just come on here to read poetry. So dont even worry about it, you are doing just fine. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Well, thanks for replying. And thanks for the comments, I guess you're right, we all come here to read and learn, we are some kind of a family, I think. Well, thanks. Bye. It's been raining since you left me. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Caz~~~You say "we are some kind of a family"...Hey why not...This is a home away from home for me...I love this place...Even if its just through poetry...I have made some good friends that I dont think I would meet just walking down the street...This is another "home" to everyone...A place where we can open our hearts and share love through poetry... *Falling in love is when you give someone a piece of your heart, falling out of love is when the piece doesnt fit* |
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