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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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17 Sept 00 Words mixed with enchantment Spell binding your heart Your ears longing for those soft delicate words Wanting more than anything to give her the world She has a voice of an angel Which echoes through the depths of your soul Each time she comes calling You no longer see any point of holding onto your heart You're more than willing to fall apart Just as long as the spell you're under isn't broken Yet you are unaware At the way her heart stares into the vasts of your soul Also longing for those soft delicate words That would make her once shattered world once more feel whole For her heart you did steal But only under her own free will So let the magic You speak entwine your hearts On such a magical night And not once fear nor worry For her heart nor she will take flight For she also longs to finally be by your side And to share the light found within her eyes And to also let you know that your feelings you no longer need to disguise... < !signature--> "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
If there were any words to tell you right now, I would, but I am at a loss for them right now!! You did this one very well! I am still in awe at how great it was! Keep it up, it's nice to see you back! < !signature--> Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Amazing...as always...simply amazing. You're words are a spell for the mind and the heart in themselves. Jeremy Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Ceinwyn! Your sentiments are lovely and flowed with wonderful, tender emotion throughout. Very nicely crafted! Best wishes, /Kit |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Unbelievable. The mystical web this poem weaves with each line, taking us back to a time when knights were the real power and scorcerers were there aides... yet it captures and relates a feeling of magic to us all... amazing... Thomas A. Plemmons Let not a word go unspoken, A thought go unheard, Let not one heart be broken Dream of a perfect world. -Th.A.P. |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Spellbound eh? I havn't felt that way in a long time. I'm pretty sure that that is pretty close to how it feels. Sometimes people don't catch on to how you feel even though to you, you have made it obvious. It is at this point one must take that chance and put it all out on the table. Make those feelings known. jason  I'm not concieted...I'm convinced. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
This is so true for many of us at Passions, Ceinwyn. --Little Girl |
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