Teen Poetry #3 |
Looking back |
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I'm now looking back For the fact's that Made my life worth Wild. Those great things And That teenage style. Thought's like these Put a smile on my face And make looking back Worth wild. Yes the "wild" is there to state the facts of being a teen and all the crazy things we do. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
what a poem...very nice...what do you expect us to be JEREMIAH???? good little girls and boys????haha were growing up were supposed to have fun and get in trouble cause when were old with kids we cant do those things anymore!!!! ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
nooooooooo wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy !!!!!! not a smile on my jaybean's face!!!!!!! what a refreshing poem from you!!! maybe i should read more at this place. teenagers these days will surprise ya!!!!! LOVE kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Great description of our generation! Rock on! VIVA LA VOLKSWAGEN!! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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MysticalAngel Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 23 |
Well said Jeremiah.. Love the poetry. You have a really unique way of writing. Like it alot! And yes.. I agree with ERIN.. we've got to have alittle evil to drive our parents crazy... otherwise they would get bored! We were put here to give their life... alittle spice... should I say! Good poem though... mysticalangel ** If something is too good to be true... 9 times out of 10 it is ** |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
Jeremiah what are you now??? Old and "past it"? I say keep it "wild" FOREVER. I am a 17 year old Irish girl and I certainly NEVER intend on giving up my lifestyle of complete and utter maddness!!! Keep putting a smile on your face - you only live once... Every day of your life should be "worth wild"!!! |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
We do a bunch of wild things, and I intend to keep to wild and crazy things! Good Work |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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