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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Note: This isn't to be taken seriously! When I read it I read it with sarcasm so try to do the same. It's just a poem I wrote when I got bored so don't take it too seriously! Am i who you think i am? When a smile appears on my face Is my heart really smiling? Or am i just a disgrace? Not always is a smile a smile But a cover-up of a frown What is the meaning of "smile"? Is it nothing but a noun? Can i find true happiness? Does it really exist? Is love really worth it? Or will i only be pissed? What is it that makes me happy? Will i ever really know? Am i who i think i am? I don't think so. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to Passions!!!Good first post...I really like it...I cant wait to see more... ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Cute poem. I did read it sarcastically like you said and it was cool. Welcome to Passions.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome! I liked this, great first post  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions CurlyGurly! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us and please keep in mind that we are very supportive of each other. The pleasure you receive from reading comments on your work is the same pleasure others need by receiving your comments on theirs. This is a rule that all poets here follow. We invite you to join the family! This is a great first post ... lots of questions, some days I still feel like asking these myself! I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is a really well written first post. "Not always is a smile a smile But a cover-up of a frown What is the meaning of "smile"? Is it nothing but a noun?" Just remember, a smile can also be a verb. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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