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Letting Go |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA 
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Letting Go My love was so pure My heart was so true I wanted you always No matter what you were to do But these feelings I can't take I don't want them anymore You don't feel the way I do Of this I am sure I don't want the butterflies in my stomach I don't want my heart to sink Next time I fall for someone like you Beforehand I will think. I'm tired of holding on To what just isn't there I'm tired of foolishly waiting For the day when you will care I'm tired of all this pain I endlessly feel inside I'm tired of these feelings I always have to hide So now I'm giving up I'm moving on, I'm letting go Inside I'm crying But outside I won't let it show And even when you're gone And we're thousands of miles apart I just want you to know You'll always have a special place in my heart ~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~ |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is a very touching poem sweetstuff, one of the hardest things to do in this life, is letting go of something you really loved. Best of luck Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets tr |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
This is so good. When my boyfriend broke up with me I felt my heart drop. I loved him so much and I know exactly what you're going through. Guys...they just don't understand unless it happens to them. I found one guy though that promised he would never treat me that way and he has. We are going out and it is our second time. As much as he has hurt me I still love him and he says he still loves me. I think you should just go for what your heart wants. And even if the relationship doesn't work out, it is still good to be friends....good luck. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I don't want the butterflies in my stomach I don't want my heart to sink Next time I fall for someone like you Beforehand I will think. You tell those guys what you want and dont want...Good way to pour out your feelings... I just want you to know You'll always have a special place in my heart Such a choice of words...I dont know if I could honestly care for a guy if he hurt me afterwards...I dont know though...Most likely I would...But its just a thought... Good work...I cant wait to see more... Sorry about going on and on... ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
ok, this reminds me of myself a while ago... hehe, been there, done that...  but I had to choose also... between my heart and my mind... and I listened to my heart... Guess it's always best to listen to your heart...good luck with it and luvz ya! VS I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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FitchGirl1896 New Member
since 2000-09-15
Posts 9 |
This is EXACTLY how I feel! Long story,but lets just say he doesnt love me like he used to ! Well anways good work! ~*FitchGirl*~ |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Oooh I liked this and I could RELATE to it so bad... it brought tears to my eyes. Good job, keep it up!  |
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