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Teen Poetry #3

The Greatest Gift of All

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-09-16 01:46 PM

You are my parents
Which I love so dear,
When I think of how much I love you
Down my cheek runs a tear.

I love you both with all my heart
Not one more then the other,
And words cannot express
You are both my Father AND Mother.

So here is my gift to you
And no it's not a trip to the mall,
But it is my love for you
Which to me is the greatest gift of all.

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

1 posted 2000-09-16 02:58 PM

aaaaawwww that was sooooo sweet!! I think it is great how much you love your parents!! That was awesome, keep up the great work!

Luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~

~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

2 posted 2000-09-16 04:15 PM

This is a very sweet and sentimental poem, I'm sure yor parents really appreciate this. You sure are right, love is the greatest gift of all

Keep it up

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Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-09-17 09:15 AM

What a wonderful, loving gift of words for your parents SurgarPie!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-09-17 12:10 PM

This was so sweet!!!I like it...I hope you gave it to your parents...Keep up the good work!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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