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Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
No amount of words can heal the pain i feel But no amount of pain can make me stop caring for you No amount of apologizes will make me forget the crule words you said But no amount of crule words said will ever make me like you less No amount of hugs can make up for the nights i spent alone But no amount of nights spent alone will ever make me not want you here with me No amount of laughter will make all tears go away and be forgetten But no amount of tears will ever wash away my memories of you No amount of gifts will ever make up for all the times you didnt say I love you too But no amount of "I love you's" gone unsaid will ever make me not love you. Regardless of everything you have done, all the things you have said or not said, and all the times i spent crying in my bed alone....I still care for you. ~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~ *~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~* |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow thats a real suprise...Even though this person put you through alot of pain you still care...I know in my heart I still care about people that have screwed me over...But its ok...You wrote a really good poem though...Keep up the good work!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
hey, that is a very well written poem. i really like it!! it reminds me so much of my friend who still loves her 'x' even tho he treated her badly!! i think i might show her that others are thinking a similiar way to her! anyways... it was gr8! luv ya Jo XOXOX * I am in love.... and loving it.... i suggest you try it* :) |
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FitchGirl1896 New Member
since 2000-09-15
Posts 9 |
This is a really good poem.It explains how alot of gurls feel about guys and guys about gurls. Is this about you?! or did you write it just to be writing it? Well etheri way good poem ,i hope to see more! ~*FitchGirl1896*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow. I love this. I especially love the way you go from one line to another including a small idea from the line above it. Marvelous, simply marvelous.... ~Carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, i loved the wording in this poem. Got me confused at first, but that's only because i'm stupid. Anyway, after the first stanze i was like "Ohhhhh.....ok im stupid"...but the poem kicked butt. I know what you're going through, but oh well. Keep writing.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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