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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Yes well....this one is odd. Wise Mans Questions: What's there to love, When hate outlives all? What's there to do, When you take your hard fall? Who serves as protector To those who are in sorrow Of what they lost in yester year, And what they'll loose tomarrow? Where are the fearless On this dark, horrid night? Enjoying the edge of death While others are in plight. Why do we live, When to live is a sin, And the only hope we have Is a possibility to win. So if reading this was helpful Without being your nurse, I thank you all, this time around To talk and to converse. ok wasn't that entertaining. bla bla  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
Damn man... You tear it up... I still can't believe that these are just "OK" ones... That is a REALLY awesome poem... Makes me look like an amatuer... Oh wait... I am... haha _.~'"'~._HaVoK_.~'"'~._ It's better to burn-out Than fade away....... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
you're a legend!!!! your poems are WAY much better then mine...  luvz, VS!! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~~~I want you to post up you best & favorite poem...Then I want to see which one I like best...OK???Keep it up buddy...You have alot of talent!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I would like to show you my favorite or best poem. That is, if I had one. I don't have a favorite or best poem of mine. I mean, i don't rate my work as BEST, GREAT, GOOD, OK, SO SO, CRAP......i rate it more like.....PASSABLE, NOT PASSABLE, WORTHLESS. So yea, i've shown some NOT PASSABLE stuff but yea. Anyway you'll see all the work in due time. So for now.....patience. Anyway, why would you want me to post up the "best" one. What fun would that be..... I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey man sorry i don't respond to all your poems but i assure i read them all...and ofcourse each one is brilliant and has depth...this one made me feel like it had a dark undertone..also reminds me of a couple songs..very truthful also...well seeya Now night arrives with her purple legions Retire now to your tents & to your dreams Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth I want to be ready. - JM |
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