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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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The petals opened showing love, it blossomed yesterday A great surprise I'm glad I saw and here begins my search for words to say *Isn't it so sweet when you find out someone has a crush on you? I wrote this a long time ago, but I just thought I'd share it anyway  * |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
aawwww, how sweet!!! I really never know what to say if somebody says he gots a crush on me or sumtin...maybe just becuz I don't want to believe it... luvz, VS I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
aawwww, how sweet!!! I really never know what to say if somebody says he gots a crush on me or sumtin...maybe just becuz I don't want to believe it... luvz, VS I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Well I suggest you say Hello first!!!LOL Tell her how you feel...Maybe she feels the same way you do!!!Go for it buddy!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
ERIN- actually, someone told me they have a crush on me! But if I did have a crush on someone I'd probably have enough guts to share. I think But anyway, thanks to both of you for the replies! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
So why dont you go for her???Or do you like someone else???Is that what it is??? ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
...I can't give away all of my secrets... |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I really enjoyed this Lakewalker ... such sweet sentiments said with so few words, very lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Cutie!! That's sweet. It is nice, but it takes so much to tell someone you have got a thing for them, so don't string her along if you don't feel the same. I'm not saying you would, but I think you get what I mean. Jenn "And you see me, with somebody new, I'm not that chained up little person still in love with you."- Gloria Gaynor |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thank you all for the replies And like I said, this was a while ago, and I wouldn't be mean like that a play with someone's heart |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Aww! This is sooo sweet! What a cool idea for a poem! I really loved this! Yes it is sweet to know someone likes you...its always a flattering feeling Great job! This was perfect! ~Kris~ ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~*When does something that you thought was so right slap you in the face and becom |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thank you so much for the reply  |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Awww, how sweet! I wish SOMEONE (anyone) had a crush on me. Perhaps Justin does, but let's not get in to my petty little stories. Love this. Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is very good! I really did like the idea of it, your wording, it is so light-hearted and gleeful. I think the last two lines should be one line, though. Just a critique. ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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