Teen Poetry #3 |
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Night of Classics |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico ![]() |
Night of Classics: This is the way it ends. While hearing the hungarian quartet People clap BRAVO! Now my emotions bear down As Afro Cubana swings over The shadow of lifes eternal calender. Her voice perplexes my Thorax into constant spinning. The bitter tasting morsel reminds me Of a glowing light escaping from a nook In the wall of my dead friend's house. BRAVO! The song kills the inside of my mind. Strange how the sound of the Beatles Can inspire more than O Fortuna! I guess it's the once was that is more Important than the now. Youth was forgotten but Brought back by a simple song. BRAVO! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Anorexorcist New Member
since 2000-09-11
Posts 6 |
hey dope another great poem...it flows beautifully and you use great words..keep it up oh poet master..heh |
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LoveBug![]()
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Youth was forgotten but Brought back by a simple song." So true, my friend. It's amazing what music can do to a person. I really enjoyed this, along with all of your work. I look forward to reading your "batches", although I regret that I lack the time to reply to them a lot. I'm looking forward to tomorrow! ![]() |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Dopes, I got one word for ya. BRAVO!!! There's no other way to put it! Catcha l8er Javi.. ~carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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