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uhmz....well......dunno, but just read it.....
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
ok, first a short msg to you guys.... maybe you won't believe it, but I'm actually F*kin' HAPPY!!! don'T ask me why, cuz I really don't know (again) but it just feels GREAT!!!!! the only prblm is, is that I just can't write decent poems when I'm happy! but I'll just give it a try...!! Saw some light today sky opened up bright and happy feelings came over me today! laughing, havin fun keepin it up moving on! yeha, it SUX!!! but I don't care!! luvz to all!!! VS! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
At least you're happy... Isn't that all that matters?... It's nice to hear the good news... Stay happy |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Virgin~~~Girl that is so good to hear!!!Im happy your happy...(I would show it by a smile but im in pain...I had all 4 of my wisdom teeth pulled) So heres a smile for you       All those are for you...Keep up the good work...Oh and it doesnt matter if it doesnt make perfect sense its still good to hear that you are happy!!!~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
You did an awseome job, but i cant think of a title. sorry. but i look forward to more poems from you. Keep up the good work *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I didnt even know you wanted help with the title...How about "My Happy Thoughts"???Or just "Happy Thoughts"???Umm I dont know Im not to good at titles myself!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
eya!! well, I'm still happy!!! but I don't think this poem really needs a title...the "uhm......well.......dunno..." thing was just becuz I didn't know anything to say... LOLhehe.... OK, dunno what to say nemore... uhm...well... a good day to y'all!! luvz] & hugz, VS!! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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