Teen Poetry #3 |
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Do I Have A Chance |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA ![]() |
When I look into those glowing eyes of yours My world seems to stop As the omnipresent beauty from within appears You glow like a light in the dark of night As your splendor radiates from you You would stop any man in his tracks With that great beauty of yours For it did stop me When I first saw you I thought to myself “Do I have a chance” A sense of doubt when through me And I brushed the idea away Knowing that since you are a junior And me, a freshman There is probably no chance at all But, whenever I see you in the hall Or in the class I always feel like I have found the one That I truly love But the question is Will you share the feeling Or will we “Just be friends” You should know by now that I love you And that I always will I have given you signs Even a child would know But if you didn’t I tell you now In order to get it off my chest And into your heart To where you can understand it all And where you may actually start Feeling the same way about me As I do you For I love you And always will Until the day we shall part And never meet again But until that day comes Would you please Share your love with me So that I can feel like someone *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
awwwwh that is so sweeet! ![]() man, i wish a guy felt like that about me!!! hehehe anyways... it was gr8 i loved it!! Luv always Jo xoxoxox * everyone is special, if you look hard enough to find it * |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ender~~~This is so sweet...But there seemed to be a little bit of negativity towards the end... Would you please Share your love with me So that I can feel like someone You are someone you are a good writer...And you dont need love to feel like you are a person!!!Cause no matter what people will make you feel like you are someone hear cause you write beautifully!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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