Teen Poetry #3 |
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To The Naked Eye |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA ![]() |
Who you are To the naked eye Your looks can be deceiving But it takes a listener Someone who cares Who wants to get to know you To see you for who you are Not for what they think you are Or want you to be Because when they know you For who you are Your looks from the outside don’t matter For no matter what they say Beauty comes from the inside And the outside is just a little package Waiting to be opened It takes someone that knows the feeling Of being ignored Alone To understand what you say What you mean Finding this person may be hard It could be months Or maybe years But you will find that person Who will listen to you And see your true beauty *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Ender, Good poem, I have felt that loneliness you talk about and I hope you have not felt it. There's a difference between knowing a path and walking that path.... |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
GREAT poem! That was beautiful!! If only everyone felt that way, and wasn't so judgemental about the way people look on the outside, because that is not what matters. Well anyway I really liked that, thanks for posting! And keep writing!! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful writing Ender. So wisely written ... I applaud your sentiments wholeheartedly, well done! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ender~~~This poem is very beautiful!!!Keep it up buddy!!!You are amazing!!! ~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~ |
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