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Teen Poetry #3

Felling Inside

Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-09-13 01:59 AM

What is that feeling
That we feel inside
When we get close
And share our feelings
What is that feeling
We feel inside
When we are around each other
Never to be apart

There is no name for it
No way to describe it
It is something that can only be felt
And not said

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

1 posted 2000-09-14 06:37 PM

HI I like this poem because I can feel the feeling while I was reading it I hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

2 posted 2000-09-14 08:36 PM

that was pretty. keep writing!

Luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~

~*~y0u CaN tRy 2 ErAsE s0mEoNe Fr0m YoUr LiFe, BuT iF tHeY rEaLLy MeAnT s0mEtHiNg 2 y0u, YoU WiLl NeVeR 4gEt ThEm.~*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-15 12:28 PM

Ender~~~This was so true my friend...You did a wonderful job on this one...Keep it up...I enjoy reading your work!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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