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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA 
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Th darkness of the night Advancing from every direction There is no way to escape it No way to hide from it It comes with a sense of power A power that is control And freedom But it comes in peace Not to hurt But to help To help you Get through the night And start a brand new day *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like your style of poetry, it's very nice to read. Great writing  |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a really great piece! It's good to see you back. Keep up the great work. [This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 09-13-2000).] |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
that was a very good poem. It just brightens your day. What ever happens so let it happen unlees you don't want it to happen. |
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Anorexorcist New Member
since 2000-09-11
Posts 6 |
hmmm i love spending time in the dark...you have a great style..keep em coming... |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
the dark is beautiful, but now I know that light can be too!! This was just a great poem!!! luvz, VS I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
This is a great poem..I love the night, and the meaning of this is true...  "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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