don't have a title.. can you help me figure one out!?!?!

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don't have a title.. can you help me figure one out!?!?!

cutie2005
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

0 posted 2000-09-12 11:35 PM

I think its funny how we meet,
Love seems to appear in mysterious ways
We started as friends then worked our way up,
I never thought I would be lucky enough,
to find someone like you!
First I said it was luck, then just lust,
But now it is just peer love
We both said it was meant to be,
I think its kind of funny how we think the same!
Whenever we talk I get that funny feeling,
and I get butterflies in my tummy, that's just funny
I never felt this way before,
You are different, but I'm not complaining
Sweet, nice and cute is what you are..
You are the guy I've been waiting for a long long time, 1 year
I'm glad we meet, I hope you are too
Because with you by my side,
I will keep to be very very happy!

Amanda (13)

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

Ender
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since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

1 posted 2000-09-13 02:07 AM

i have an idea--- "the meeting". i think it works perfectly here. Good job though. I look forward to more poems from you.

*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender*

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-09-13 11:29 AM

How about Mysterious Love???I dont know Im not to good with titles...But this was good...Hope to see more by you!!!

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-09-13 01:31 PM

You did a great job expressing your emotions here, nice poem!

cutie2005
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

4 posted 2000-09-13 05:21 PM

Thankyou everyone!! I really like the meeting but also mysterious ways.. hehe!! I'm never good at making titles, so I always have people help me there! Thankyou!
Amanda

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-09-13 08:41 PM

I liked the poem but i dont know. i think the writer should come up with his/her titles. It only completes the piece. It's the final piece of the puzzle....oh well thats only my opinion.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

6 posted 2000-09-13 08:44 PM

This is a really good piece! It's wonderful to finally find the one you've been waiting for. I'm not good with titles, but I was thinking that "Finally" might be good.

Keep up the good work!

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