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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
Just break me Hurt me Again Do it to me Slap my face Again Heard it all before Seeing it all Again But I'm used to it Everything Again Not gonna get over it This time I won't, not Again But I'll break you, hurt you, slap you Make you feel the pain I feel Again Til you know what you did to me And make you cry, like I did over and over AGAIN I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
WOW!! I have sooo been there!! I'm sorry about this my friend! Hope you're ok! you got the powerful point across in so little words, that's hard to do, but you did it wonderfully. I commend you on your work. Keep it up! < !signature-->Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~  If aLl My FrIeNdS JuMpEd OfF a BrIdGe, I WoUlDn'T JuMp WiTH ThEm BeCaUsE I'd Be At ThE bOtToM tO CaTcH ThEm. [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 09-11-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the style it was written in. Good job  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Til you know what you did to me And make you cry, like I did over and over AGAIN Virgin~~~WOW!!!Show them they way you feel and how you want them to feel...Let this person feel the pain that you once felt... Just break me Hurt me Again Dont let this person get the best of you...It sounds like that in the lines I copied above...Show them that you are stronger then they really think you are... Keep up the good work...And Im glad to see that you are posting more here!!!  ~*Each day is a treasure box from God, just waiting to be opened*~ |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
you know, I was like crying when I wrote this (and the other one)... I'm like SO mad...mostly at myself actualy... cuz I always do the same things... so I have to be punished or sumtin... dunno what to do with my life anymore, but I cant treat ppl the way they treat me, cuz I know how bad it feels and I don't want anyone to feel that way... I just want the ppl who did it to me, to feel the way I did... or so that they can imagine... and think before they do... luv, Virgin Suïcide... I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
this one is intense. I love it. Read it this mornin', but had to go, so I write now. Well, anyway, what's up? I'm gonna email you, alright? Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
yeah sure it's allright!! and thnx for ya reply!! luv, Virgin suïcide! I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
Want ME to make him feel pain???...It would be no trouble at all... And besides...I don't think that guy deserved a chick like you.. |
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