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Lucius Cade
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

0 posted 2000-06-22 02:40 AM

How can the means to life be
  To settle down with an occupation
  Go to your job, and take your station
  We work to live, and live to work
  If this be my life, may I go berserk
  Nothing is worse then to hate your profession
  To learn this once, is to learn your lesson
But a different future I see

I will never take my place
  In the world as it is given
I'll forge a path at my own pace
  By happiness I'm driven
And my future I embrace
  I have a different vision


Lucidity is the answer to all problems

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-22 02:50 AM

i voted on this one because you caught my heart here with this one thanks.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

2 posted 2000-06-22 03:14 AM

a well penned thought of the way you want your life to be. do what you wanna do, be who you wanna be. good thought, good format.

We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

3 posted 2000-06-22 03:14 AM

a well penned thought of the way you want your life to be. do what you wanna do, be who you wanna be. good thought, good format.

We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

Lani_DarkOne
Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 152
UK

4 posted 2000-06-23 02:21 PM

Excellent...
The first thought when i read this was YES!!
This is exactly how I feel. I detest school, the thought of
"We work to live, and live to work
If this be my life, may I go berserk
Nothing is worse then to hate your profession"
is very true.

I'm going to do what the last stanza says.
Keep it up!

Lani_DarkOne
Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 152
UK

5 posted 2000-06-23 02:21 PM

sorry, mistake!

[This message has been edited by Lani_DarkOne (edited 06-23-2000).]

brendon2k
Junior Member

since 2000-05-11

Posts 38
none

6 posted 2000-06-28 04:06 AM

Great Poem Jesse! Your best poem by fat that i have read so far! Ecellent work.

Vball Chickie1624
Member

since 2000-05-14

Posts 116
New York

7 posted 2000-06-28 08:20 AM

This is an excellent poem. Well written...and definately true.
Keep writing

Luv ya,
Danielle

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-11-18 03:34 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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