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Teddy Tears |
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LiL'Kay Junior Member
since 2000-09-09
Posts 21Canada |
*~ based on a true story~* Teddy Tears As she lies on her bed Heart and mind all in peices In her arms, there I lay As the storys unfold To comfort her, I stay As she crys on my shoulder I cant tell the secrets That need to be told A mixture of fear and hate In her anger Binding the chill From the blistering cold Her innocence stolden Childhood changed in a instint Teddy tears what I cry Beneath this stiching of gold LiL'Kay [This message has been edited by LiL'Kay (edited 09-10-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Beneath the stiching of gold. i liked that. keep it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
To comfort her, I stay As she crys on my shoulder Sounds like you are a good friend to this person...Good poem too!!! ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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LiL'Kay Junior Member
since 2000-09-09
Posts 21Canada |
Actaully this poem is about a teddy bear Who is the only one that a little girl tells her secrets to And the teddy knows this sertant secret must be herd but he cant say nothin it may sound a little werid but i was tryin to get creative LiL'Kay |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow Lil Kay you had me thinking that this teddy bear was someone that was a person...You sure fooled me... ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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