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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA 
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You are the beat in my heart You are the strength I feel The happiness inside You mean the world Without you Where would I be What would I have done You have changed my life Opened my eyes To new, better things Everyday is new Everyday is looked forward to No time is wasted I live my life to the fullest Because of you And how u have changed me My life is better than it ever has been You have touched me in a way nobody else has You have ventured into the unknown And have come out victorious You are special *I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender* |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Wow, this is a lot like my stlye of writing, I seem to write about the same things, special people inmy life. I know exactly what your talking about like the person opened your eyes and brought you out into the world. Whoever this person is, keep them by your side forever, people like just don't come and go in your life, they were meant to be there forever. keep up the great work!!!!smiles  poe Life isn't about holding grudges or starting fights life is meant to be enjoyed |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey! I really enjoyed this piece. Sometimes I am one to forget how special people really are, your poem reminded me of the fact that there are good people out there. Thank you for sharing your gift.. ~carly Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
yes, she is special. I hope things work out perfectly for you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
WOW Ender!!!This is so good...I know how it feels... My life is better than it ever has been You have touched me in a way nobody else has This is the same way I feel about my boyfriend...At one point I had no one except for him...And at the time we were just friends...Then our friendship blossomed into a relationship...And everyday I thank God that I have him in my life... I never thought that anyone would be able to help me...I was in a hard point in my life...Then God gave me a reason to look forward to life...He sent me an angel to help with what I was going through... ~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is so good! It's flowed so well, I love it Thanks for sharing this special person (and the poem ) with us. |
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Virgin Suïcide Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 319Netherlands |
this was soooo sweet.....if only I had some kind of person like that....but unfortunately...everybody just walks out of my life...just at the time I need them most.... luv, Virgin Suïcide... I dream about how it's gonna end Approaching me quickly Living a life of fear I only want my mind to be clear... ~*~silverchair, suicidal dream~*~ |
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