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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-09-10 02:13 AM

Previously I thought I could only post a maximum of 2 poems a day....but i re-read the rules and it said in big bold letters "2 or 3 maximum"....so i pick 3.So from now on I will post up 3 poems a day cuz im trying to get through the 3rd batch as soon as possible to get to the 4th (me as a 10th grader)....cuz i KNOW some of you actually care about my postings and would like to see something recent. so dont worry, im hurrying!! Ok....so here's the 3rd poem of today!

Wind:

The cold wind blows below my feet.
The trees sway in'sinc
Moans of careless lovers surround me.
Clearly in mind never to think.

Why not take shortcuts in this long path?
My heart feels extremely lost.
My mind thinks with electric source,
As the wind turns into a lonely cold frost.

The eyes of an eagle fall in my hand.
Something hit him on his way home.
Like the blind bird, I fly
With no direction to possibly roam.

This cold wind is a deadly weapon of nature
It's used more often than not.
Stay away from this sudden chill
And I just gave you a thought for a thought.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-09-10 09:46 AM

I like this batch, so I think I'm going to really enjoy the next ones. This is some talent for ninth grade! Great job, love the poem

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2000-09-10 03:19 PM

Ah Dopey...What can I say? I loved it! It's great for me to have a role model with so much talent! hehe.. You da man!! Can't wait to see your next batch!!

~carly

Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-09-11 02:36 AM

Dopey~~~I seen that you asked Tamma how to put the picture up...Well go to members area at the top and click there...Im not sure but I think that it will tell you how to put your picture up...Or go to Q&A and ask...Someone will help you!!!

Ohh and good poem!!!

~*YoU cAn CoMpLaIn CuZ rOsEs HaVe ThOrNs Or ReJoIcE cUz ThOrNs HaVe RoSeS*~

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